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Post by portorockfinest on Apr 13, 2010 22:23:34 GMT -5
of course it needs editing but the story as is, is great and easy to get into
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Post by Danae Ayusso on Apr 13, 2010 23:47:07 GMT -5
Well the Prophecy Saga isn't really a masterpiece yet, it needs some parts that aren't really needed cut. just maybe, I may be stupid by saying that. Everything needs edited. but until you read two and three, the little things you think that don't need to be there actually play into two and three, even book four.
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Post by noahheels1 on Apr 14, 2010 14:47:13 GMT -5
like the robbery?
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Post by Danae Ayusso on Apr 14, 2010 16:11:02 GMT -5
very much so. how could you not see the significance of that in book one? she saw Knox as the killer that she couldn't imagine him to be, the darker side of him she just couldn't picture in her mind. and on the flipside of that, she herself was a killer, something that she never knew and couldn't possibly fathom or imagine. she was always the weakest link in their family, and was delicate as glass. and without giving it a second thought, she killed a man. plus if it wouldn't have been for tynan giving john CPR and not giving up, Knox wouldn't have thought to do the same with her when Sullivan tried to kill her. so the robbery, was very significant. and the book store trip plays into book two and four, very much so.
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Post by noahheels1 on Apr 14, 2010 17:54:35 GMT -5
Oh, cool that just went right over my head.
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Post by Danae Ayusso on Apr 14, 2010 21:01:48 GMT -5
Oh, cool that just went right over my head. the prophecy saga is filled with all kinds of little details that are easy to over look but play into something else and it snowballs. i had my friend rebecca go through them after she read them and she printed it out and marked with red what to cut then marked in blue what not to cut because you couldn't cut that because part blah blah blah wouldn't match and so on and so on. It was funny. i loved it. she said i had issues and she loves them.
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Post by portorockfinest on Apr 14, 2010 22:49:57 GMT -5
lol thats cool... i read it twice and actually found stuff i missed in the first read around which was funny
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Post by noahheels1 on Apr 15, 2010 15:13:46 GMT -5
I never read things twice, I can't believe she printed the WHOLE book out. Thats a bunch of pages, and not worth the ink.
Read Shadow Night: Children of the Angels, and loved it! It was so fricking awesome, and am dreading for more!!
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Post by Danae Ayusso on Apr 15, 2010 16:49:30 GMT -5
I never read things twice, I can't believe she printed the WHOLE book out. Thats a bunch of pages, and not worth the ink. Read Shadow Night: Children of the Angels, and loved it! It was so fricking awesome, and am dreading for more!! Yeah i need to finish that one.
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Post by noahheels1 on Apr 15, 2010 20:16:15 GMT -5
Yeah you do, you left me hanging..
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Post by Danae Ayusso on Apr 15, 2010 23:17:23 GMT -5
Yeah you do, you left me hanging.. yet another in the list my first attempt at a narrative story we will see how it goes
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Post by noahheels1 on Apr 16, 2010 22:23:56 GMT -5
The first part was pretty good, hated Zeke but I like the rest of the storyline. Do you just finish the books that people want you to finish? Like the popular books of yours?
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Post by portorockfinest on Apr 20, 2010 23:39:28 GMT -5
so back to guys unite!! lol i like where your going with FA2 i didn't expect you to go this route. i'm curious to see what tayte does when he sees "mikkel" and "disa".
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Post by noahheels1 on Apr 22, 2010 15:26:44 GMT -5
haven't reading it yet, I've been addicted to Eight Grade BITES! Its an awesome book, loving it!
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Post by Danae Ayusso on Apr 22, 2010 18:01:27 GMT -5
haven't reading it yet, I've been addicted to Eight Grade BITES! Its an awesome book, loving it! never read it but i'm a bit old for it now hahahah
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